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Post by marshall on Oct 27, 2012 16:11:52 GMT -5
Nothing new to report. Expect a slightly revised version of Suzanne. Only changed the first two lines from the last version. They now read:
"Lays down her mat, as the sun comes up
In a Warrior pose she greets the new day
Blah, blah, blah, blah, . . . ,"
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Post by marshall on Oct 27, 2012 16:13:14 GMT -5
PS - Is this the new home? Or just temporary?
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Post by mrkelley on Oct 27, 2012 16:43:56 GMT -5
PS - Is this the new home? Or just temporary? Let's hope it's temporary. I miss the old set-up...  |
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Post by bee3 on Oct 27, 2012 18:06:35 GMT -5
PS - Is this the new home? Or just temporary? Well, it was meant to be temporary, but we'll see how it goes. Its been months of shit service over at Harmony Central... do they have any plans whatsoever of improving? Have they communicated anything? |
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Post by rickdieffenbach on Oct 28, 2012 6:45:57 GMT -5
Guitar is beautiful.
Lovely tune. When you get to "I often think of her that way"... melody / chordage and lyrics was a wow, with chills... the good kind.
A little dan fogelbergish. Loven that.
When I grow up I want to write a song like yours.
Rick
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Post by oswlek on Oct 28, 2012 7:06:54 GMT -5
In earlier version you left a slight pause between "that" and "way" on the title line.
"I often think of her that.... way"
^ That is a better way to phrase the line, and it jumped out in a bad way when you altered it this time.
You nailed the chorus in this one better than I'd heard it before.
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Post by marshall on Oct 28, 2012 21:29:49 GMT -5
Interesting you liked it better the old way. When listening the hesitation, which was just a delayed slide up, bothered me. So I worked on changing that.
I'll listen to both and see if something seems signature for the tune.
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Post by marshall on Oct 28, 2012 21:32:30 GMT -5
Guitar is beautiful. Lovely tune. When you get to "I often think of her that way"... melody / chordage and lyrics was a wow, with chills... the good kind. A little dan fogelbergish. Loven that. When I grow up I want to write a song like yours. Rick Ha, ha, ha. That's a 1959 Country Western. A mighty fine instrument for sure. The Fogleberg comment is interesting. I see where you'd say that. I'm hot and cold on Fogelberg. But I was going for a simpler more popular style with this one. So, I guesd I'll take it as a compliment.  |
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Post by shadowsofbirds on Oct 28, 2012 22:52:31 GMT -5
I'm a fan.  I sort of want to hear you do a cover of Neil Young's Down By The River now though. |
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Post by unclenny on Oct 31, 2012 15:53:30 GMT -5
Me too.  |
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Post by stickboy on Nov 1, 2012 5:37:29 GMT -5
Classic - in every sense.
Very impressed by this, I can see why people are mentioning Neil Young, it certainly has that feel.
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